You are here#4: Beta Reading
#4: Beta Reading
Okay, you have gotten your story as far as you can take it. Now it's time to let someone else read it. If you're a lucky writer, you already have a great beta reader partner (yes it is a partnership to make the story the best it can be), but most of us have to have replacements or backups or multiple betas for every story. Or maybe this is your first time beta reading for someone and you're in a panic on where to start. We're going to start with a few guidelines for both the author and the beta reader.
FOR THE AUTHOR
- Know how you want to receive the document once the beta is finished.
What this means is you need to know how you like to make corrections. Some writers prefer the beta readers to make changes to the story without commenting. Others prefer to have the mistakes pointed out and left for the writer to fix. Beta readers have their own preferences on how they like to edit. Making sure you both know how each other likes to operate before getting started stops a lot of frustrations. Also keep in mind that is easier for you to compromise on this than to force the beta reader to change their style.
- Question, don't whine.
If a suggested change has you confused, you should ask the beta reader to clarify. Offer an explanation if you find you did something stupid and got caught on it. (I'll talk about the leather jacket/vest incident later.) But don't query every suggestion with a "yeah but..." Usually, that just delays the inevitable changing of the manuscript.
- No suggested change is a personal attack.
Every writer has struggles with this issue. Yes, your vision might be perfect, but the translating the vision to written words that other people can understand is far from it. Just because you messed up doesn't mean that you are any less intelligent, less talented, less anything than you were before. This is another reason why the cooling off period before editing is so vital. Detaching yourself from your work lets you see the suggestions on their merits.
FOR THE BETA READER
- Know how you like to edit.
Knowing how you work best and then discussing what the author expects keeps both of you from getting disgusted with the whole process.
- Keep all comments civil and humorous.
As cathartic as it can be to rant about the state of the story, the wretchedness of the grammar, the handling of the subject; ranting to the author does not help. Rant to your friends, and keep your editing comments polite, or if you can humorous. (Though if you are unsure of the reaction humor will get, stick with polite.) As much as writers try to detach ourselves from our stories, it never completely happens. A good question to ask when phrasing a comment: would this hurt me if I got it on my story?
- Point out the good stuff as well as the stuff that needs correcting.
There is nothing more satisfying than seeing a beta reader putting "LOL" next to the part you wanted people to chuckle over. Pointing out the good with the bad shows the author that all is not lost, that there is good stuff to salvage when they feel that there isn't. And if you comment directly into the story on the errors, you need to comment directly into the story on the good stuff too.
HOW TO BETA READ
A beta reader is an editor without the power to keep a story from getting published or to get paid for the work he or she puts into a story. Editors and beta readers are both the advocates and protectors of the reader's rights.
READERS BILL OF RIGHTS
- You have the right not to have to stop and guess at a writer's meaning.
- You have the right to paragraphs for ease of reading.
- You have the right to read about strong characters.
- You have the right to correctly-spelt text.
- You have the right to transitions between scenes and/or character's point of views.
- You have the right to meaningful dialogue.
- You have the right to warning on the material, either through a blurb or disclaimer or summary.
- You have the right to description, depending on the style and format of the writing.
- You have the right to a well developed and cohesive plot.
- You have the right to entertainment.
When one of these rights are violated in a story, it's the beta reader's job to point it out and offer a suggestion for correcting if they can think of one.
In steps, beta reading resembles self-editing. The differences being that this is the first time you have read the story and the style sheet is available for a reference. I would suggest following the same pattern of steps that you use for self-editing. I'm working with the assumption that you as a beta reader will be just marking the errors and making suggestions, and not actually making the corrections. Making corrections will change the amount of steps you must go through. And of course, you can modify these steps into what you feel comfortable working with.
THE STEPS
- Spell check and grammar check with the computer. Go ahead and run the file through the computer's checks. Be sure to consult the style sheet for anything it flags, especially words. Things that are found that are not addressed on the style sheet mark to double check.
- Word count. This step is only necessary if the author has asked for help getting to a certain word count.
- Print out. For some unknown reason, editing works best when you work with paper. Plus it's easy to mark where you had to stop. You should do all the read-throughs on the printout.
- First read-through. This should be handled the same way that the first read through for self-editing is handled. You should get an overview of how the story works, look for any place where the writing falters, and make notes of problems and of what you liked.
- Multiple read-throughs. Go through the manuscript concentrating on one issue at a time. Here's a recap of a broad way to break up the document:
- Scenes
- Characters
- Point of View
- Dialogue
- Paragraph Breaks and Repetition
- Proportion
- Grammar
- Finishing Touches
- Type up the comments. This can be a little tricky, depending on your level of computer skill. Most word processing programs let you change the color of your text. I recommend using red to grab attention. Add the comments as close to the problems as you are able, and rename the document when you save it. Save it as the same type as it was sent to you. Now if you know how to code HTML, you can make the changes that way.
- Send the edited file back to the author.
Now you know what you should do, but how to know if something is wrong? Or what you should be looking for as a beta reader? This is what I'm hoping the rest of the Editing Lessons will provide.
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